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Yalto
Invented by Edward Ibeh: line 1 to 15:  3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5, no rhyme required. 

We don’t tend to remember that our words carry weight, opting to forget just how much damage we can do to a fledgling heart hesitant to take wing and fly, weighed down by the leaden words anger chose to fling. (Yalto) 05/21/2020

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Date: 5/21/2020 2:01:00 PM
Nice metaphor Emile, fledgling hearts indeed!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/21/2020 2:15:00 PM
Thanks John, it's always nice to hear from you my friend, Emile.

Book: Shattered Sighs