Optimistic Orange

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Overjoyed at the prospects
Pumpkins orange and ripe
Totally ready dot the field 
Intermingled with weeds
Mature ready to be eaten
Ickle one, not a few
Summer nurtured the crop
Turned the field into apricot
Iconism for his optimism
Captured in that glorious lantern 

Open door to new adventure
Reaping the harvest of gratitude
Another aroma allspice in pumpkin cake 
Nacarat lusciousness in nutmeg spiced pie
Gift of God and of the garden
Enjoy optimistic orange 

Ickle(British) slang for little
Iconism-representation or semblance
Nacarat-orange-red

Written: March 04, 2016
Inspired by Silent One's Contest: United Color/Optimistic Orange

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/14/2016 11:50:00 PM

Sara, Congratulations on your orange theme win. always ~LINDA~

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/8/2016 10:35:00 PM

I am happy that you, too, are also optimistic about orange. Very lovely. Orange cream-sicles are also a nice treat, but of course pumpkin is the more natural way to go. This poem makes me hungry and thankful.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/6/2016 7:47:00 PM

Hi Sara, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. I think i shall head for the kitchen. I enjoyed the food...i mean the read....Vlad.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/7/2016 8:34:00 AM

I hope that the trip to the kitchen produced a delightful snack or meal..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 3/6/2016 5:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Sara. Pumpkin pie is one of my favorites.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/7/2016 8:35:00 AM

Pumpkin pie is not one of my favorites but I have made them and have eaten some..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Beautiful Scars

Date: 3/6/2016 10:10:00 AM

Sara, "Open door to new adventure Reaping the harvest of gratitude"...My fav time of year with my fav type of dessert, Open door to new adventure Reaping the harvest of gratitude

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/7/2016 8:37:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by..I am glad that you liked those lines..Sara

Beautiful Scars
Date: 3/6/2016 10:11:00 AM

I'm sorry I stated your quote twice! Hehe I meant congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/6/2016 9:14:00 AM

- Sara, congratulations on your win in contest: ORANGE - hugs // Anne-Lise:)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/7/2016 8:37:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by with congrats..Sara

John Lawless

Date: 3/5/2016 8:48:00 AM

Sara, I spent a few nights in the pumpkin patch with Linus waiting for the great pumpkin to appear....settled for warm pumpkin pie and hot chocolate.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 3/7/2016 8:38:00 AM

John, I have watched a few of those myself but never really been in the pumpkin patch..Thanks for dropping by..Sara