Optimistic Look Into My Future

Her smile is golden
Shall I bottle it and sell it?

Imagining joy she could bring
in forms of star dust and twilight streams
she has more than enough
she is forever smiling

my step is light
we dance a lively dance together
I am feeling giddy and excited

you are my future I tell her
She laughs
I know!
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Hankins Avatar
November 24, 2021 at 4:15 PM
Self-awareness is a wonderful attribute, Caren, and this poem exudes it. I'm glad it ended with the words "I know!"
Krutsinger Avatar
November 26, 2021 at 2:30 PM
I am smirking now.
Daniel Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 12:57 AM
Optimistic indeed:)
Krutsinger Avatar
November 20, 2021 at 8:55 AM
I try to radiate it at work for the children.
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