Optical Illusions

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Commentary on the world as it appears, as one thing but is a fantasy not the reality.

Optical illusions

                  Seeing is believing at least that's what they say
             Sometimes though, what our eyes see leads us astray

      World banks and their buildings are so, impressive to the sight
      Promising financial freedom, while profits, like birds take flight

   Political leaders, world rulers, seem so confident giving their speech
    Fulfilling their vainglorious promises however, is often out of reach.

    Physical beauty of men and women is often just simply superficial
   When cosmetic surgery alters images, they end up looking artificial

   Actors and singers, superstars, have their stylists and make  up on
 All are not as they appear, broken idols ever seeking a glory long gone

    Religious leaders with their pomp, showing off  illustrious vestments
    Optical illusions promising salvation while minding their investments

   This world is full of hypocrisy promising things but they are only lies
       Optical illusions at their best, but it's time to open our eyes.

John Derek Hamilton
February 12,2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/27/2016 2:29:00 PM
I loved this poem..it's so painfully true about the world we live in. So many in disguise to hide the true them.
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Date: 2/28/2017 12:28:00 PM
Thanks Lisa, missed this comment somehow!
Date: 2/12/2016 2:22:00 PM
This piece is full of emotion and truths, as the author uses his skills to bring the experience alive in the reader's mind with gentle, yet vivid clarity. Emile.
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Date: 2/12/2016 3:44:00 PM
Thanks Emile always appreciate your fine feedback and support.
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