Opposites

muffled thoughts
subdued actions
tortured minds
lead to deadly distractions
trouble brewing
deep in my soul
making my way to heaven
but
holding on to hell
a cross roads 
only time will tell
quiet hallways
closed doors
fabled actions
fatal attractions
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 7, 2010 at 1:46 PM
Sure is all the teens I work with, enjoyed,..p.d.
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June 7, 2010 at 5:14 AM
sounds like a normal full life ;) Light & love
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