Opposite Moods

close yet far apart   our reflections juxtaposed   moods of dark and light




Written on 3/13/2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 7:00 PM
this is quite good. I think one of the best!!
Leiser Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 10:22 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! You are very encouraging :)
Leiser Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 9:43 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! You are very encouraging :)
Hicks Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 6:48 PM
Great interpretation, Laura. We all have a little yin and yang in us. I wrote one for this contest, but I guess I was a day late ... hard to keep up, they go so quickly ... lol.
Leiser Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 9:43 PM
Sorry you didn't get in the contest in time Timothy. I've missed some, too!
La France Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 2:10 AM
Laura, this is great for the contest, and I am loving it 7 ~
Leiser Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 9:42 PM
Thank you, BW :)
Callus Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 5:28 PM
Really good, Laura. I know of others who are far apart, yet they feel close! It's all in the mind...and heart! ~ Regards // paul
Leiser Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 7:16 PM
Thank you, Paul, for stopping by to comment:)
Daniel Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 8:48 AM
Great monoku :} All the best:}
Leiser Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 11:44 AM
Thank you, Jo :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 12:58 AM
Oh, this is a winner, I can already tell. I can see the two in my minds eye. Brilliant Laura! ; ) #7
Leiser Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 1:32 AM
Thanks, Connie! :)
Vaso Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 11:38 PM
I like, I mean both of my moods like!
Leiser Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 12:05 AM
Like, I know, right? ;)
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