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10/07/2026

Poem with opposite messages in two stanzas

 

Opposite messages


                                                 Wait.
                                Please do not  leave me.
                                       If you don’t love,
                           I may ask your favor, but can’t force you
                           I am loner : If you love me, it’s fine.
                               If you be mine, I will be yours :
                                                 Forever.

    REVERSE 
                                             Forever
                               I will be yours, If you be mine.
                        If you love me, it’s fine. I am loner :
                        I may ask your favor, but can’t force you.
                                        If you don’t love,
                                              leave me.
                                      Please do not wait.
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