Brian Davey Poet Couplet

Opposite In Thought

Opposite in Thought



               Feel in which you think you can not
                              Taste the things you like cold but hot

                         View the picture using different eyes
                                        Smile from the pain in unwanted good-byes

                                   Take care of what you have no interest in
                                                  Kneel in front of God but pray for sin

                                       Cry for the living as you bury the dead
                                                           Always look behind you as you walk ahead



                                                                            bmdavey@10/09/17

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Darlene De Beaulieu January 22, 2018 at 1:48 PM Hey Brian,this is a great poem you wrote. have a nice day my friend. Brian Davey May 21, 2018 at 4:28 AM Thank you I appreciate you

Silent One October 11, 2017 at 9:11 AM Hey Brian.. hope you are well.. Great write! Brian Davey October 11, 2017 at 10:01 AM Hey there old friend thanks for stopping by for a comment

Kim Rodrigues October 10, 2017 at 7:28 AM This is a fun one, Brian! First two lines remind me of a recent moment where I thought I was going to taste one thing but it was another. How funny that the taste was great but hidden in my assumption of a different flavor. Must be how babies feel at their first taste of each new food! Brian Davey October 11, 2017 at 9:59 AM Thank you Kim I am glad you had some fun with this one