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Opposite In Thought

Opposite in Thought Feel in which you think you can not Taste the things you like cold but hot View the picture using different eyes Smile from the pain in unwanted good-byes Take care of what you have no interest in Kneel in front of God but pray for sin Cry for the living as you bury the dead Always look behind you as you walk ahead bmdavey@10/09/17

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/22/2018 1:48:00 PM

Hey Brian,this is a great poem you wrote. have a nice day my friend.

Brian Davey
Date: 5/21/2018 4:28:00 AM

Thank you I appreciate you

Silent One

Date: 10/11/2017 9:11:00 AM

Hey Brian.. hope you are well.. Great write!

Brian Davey
Date: 10/11/2017 10:01:00 AM

Hey there old friend thanks for stopping by for a comment

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/10/2017 7:28:00 AM

This is a fun one, Brian! First two lines remind me of a recent moment where I thought I was going to taste one thing but it was another. How funny that the taste was great but hidden in my assumption of a different flavor. Must be how babies feel at their first taste of each new food!

Brian Davey
Date: 10/11/2017 9:59:00 AM

Thank you Kim I am glad you had some fun with this one