Opportunity Expiring

Pardon me, I am aspiring
to some day be retiring,
but first I must be acquiring
a position. Though I’m not keen on perspiring
I admit I have been admiring
your benefits and employees’ attiring,
and since a salary I’m requiring,
and I trust you aren’t frequently firing,
and I promise not to be with unions conspiring,
I thought I’d simply go about inquiring
if perhaps you were hiring?


3/16/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Fenn Avatar
July 19, 2021 at 6:26 PM
Clever PS!
Awtry Avatar
November 2, 2021 at 9:34 PM
Thank you Jennifer :)
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April 23, 2021 at 1:29 PM
I love a good monorhyme, and you did it. Well done! PS.
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November 2, 2021 at 9:35 PM
Thank you Geoffrey :)
Calasibetta Avatar
March 23, 2021 at 4:32 PM
Aah, what fun! Your mono-rhyme delightful. Take Care, Paulette
Awtry Avatar
April 2, 2021 at 2:13 PM
Thank you Paulette :)
Theraven Avatar
March 21, 2021 at 9:37 AM
P.S., Wow, really love the Willy Wonka-esque wonder in your lines. Congratulations, you got the job in Monorhyme. -Richard
Theraven Avatar
March 27, 2021 at 4:59 PM
Yes, never read the book, but I loved the movie. Gene Wilder made it a magical feast for the generations. -R
Awtry Avatar
March 22, 2021 at 5:27 PM
Thank you Richard! --"Willy Wonka-esque wonder"-- what a great comment :)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 5:20 PM
I love this! Great topic and monorhymes!
Awtry Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 6:50 PM
Thank you Kim :) ~ps
Dietrich Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 4:38 PM
Awesome mono-rhyming. I did one a while back and was disappointed not to make a winners' list with it!
Awtry Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 6:50 PM
Thank you so much Andrea :) ~ps
Milgate Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 12:48 PM
Many are hoping that they can retire and enjoy life before expiring!! Harder in the US. Fun poem!!! Clever!
Awtry Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 6:49 PM
Oh very true! Thank you! ~ps
Cunningham Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 12:19 PM
Love the flow of this one PS, well written. Tom
Awtry Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 6:50 PM
Thank you much Yom :) ~ps
Wolf Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 12:03 PM
Such a 'lilt and lolly' to this one. Musical as can be?! Perhaps the position is with an artistic concern... Delightful and delicious, P.S!
Awtry Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 6:50 PM
Glad you liked it! Thank you :) ~ps
Michael Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 10:06 AM
Nice...Enjoyed it.
Awtry Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 6:47 PM
Thanks Arturo! :)
Hankins Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 8:31 AM
I got a good laugh out of this. It sounds like you're not terribly interested in getting a job! Loved the rhymes!
Awtry Avatar
March 16, 2021 at 9:29 AM
Oh I am glad! Thank you :)
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