Opportunity

Opportunity came knocking,
Showed me his ID,
Came with his rehearsed spiel,
We are in your area this week,
Us opportunists!
With our reduced deals,
Yes! I thought! 
I know your game,
I tried to speak,
He got louder,
Don’t miss out he said,
This offer is the best,
Exclusively for you,
Sign up today 	
Your last chance!
I kept saying! No
He wouldn’t listen
Promising me the world,
He must be programmed,
I’ll get rid of him,
Slam the door shut! I thought,
Raise my voice!
His foot Jammed firmly in the door,
So I acted like I was interested
Agreed with him,
Played along with his game,
Yes opportunity that sounds great,
He got very excited,
Started to go in for the kill
I was laughing inside,
Wondered when he would stop,
No other opportunity was better, 
Yes I thought but even opportunist gets tired,
And he did,
I looked him straight in the eyes,
No, I said!
This time I knew that he had heard me,
Not today thank you.
That was the last time 
Opportunity passed my way.

02/11/2016
For contest sponsor
Nayda Evette Negron

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 11/3/2016 4:12:00 PM
Really clever Wendy
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 11/3/2016 5:01:00 PM
Thank you didn't do anything in the comp thou x think I got it in too late x
Date: 11/2/2016 9:08:00 PM
For clever, Wendy - I really liked it. CayCay
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 11/3/2016 4:34:00 AM
Thank you CayCay x
Date: 11/2/2016 7:08:00 PM
I love your take on the theme Wendy! It is actually illegal to cold canvass on the streets of our little Island so we do not have to suffer this scenario:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 11/3/2016 4:35:00 AM
Thank you Jan x did it read ok without speech marks, do you think I need them x
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