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Enfeebled by suffering, my steps refused to abide my call Tears streamed down when opportunity gently walked into my life Should I or should I not accept the responsibility that breathed close by? I laid aside my self pity, doused out the agony with pain killers And put on my armour of fortitude Smilingly I went forth with my two stalwarts As Alexander may have with his army against Poros In a fierce battle of wits we won a magnificent love cup trophy Like a towering sterling chalice we held on to its proud handles The dopamine effect kept us beaming on the podium As shutterbugs kept us showered in their limelight November 3, 2016 For Nayda Ivette Negron

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Date: 11/4/2016 7:33:00 PM
I see this was a winner from Nette's remarks and I see why. It's wonderful to read, Balveen.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/6/2016 1:09:00 AM
Andrea , your gentle praise makes me elated. Love, Balveen
Date: 11/4/2016 3:24:00 PM
how unique, balveen.. no wonder it hit the charts.. best congrats and huggs
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/6/2016 1:07:00 AM
Thanks, Nette! Infact, a your poems are such an inspiration ! Love, Balveen

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