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Opinion (Multiple Haiku)

OPINION (multiple Haiku)

did you see the show
“america has talent?”
where the hell was it?

it was a circus world
but minus the elephants
spare the pachyderms

oh where in the world
can singers with 5-note range
go to hollywood?

i’ll give you a clue
“america has talent”
hey!   give me a break!

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/1/2016 3:43:00 PM returning to this one where you make fun of one of my favorite shows. hahaha. Well, that guy with the puppet sure made it big off this show! You are right though, it should not be a showcase for singers. They already have VOICE and American IDol for THAT Login to Reply Daver Austin Date: 3/2/2016 10:37:00 AM Ooops! Maybe I just tuned in on a bad night. God, Andrea, if you knew how many shows and concerts I've played with great artists, you might understand. Love ya to pieces, daver

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/14/2010 11:27:00 PM hahaha. I LIKE that show, So COME ON THERE> hahaha. you Leo you! Login to Reply

Kim Hilliker Date: 8/14/2010 10:49:00 AM lol. :-) Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 8/12/2010 7:36:00 AM funny write...look who is judging!! LOL Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 8/11/2010 5:43:00 AM I agress and share your views, Daver Login to Reply

James Marshall Goff Date: 8/11/2010 4:35:00 AM Hi Daver, my friend...anything that sells poison, addictions and chemical ingestive products successfully to the ant-hills of Americans will continue to air...thx for your comment on the dark arts...I concur.....I have a similar story and fight the war daily, am currently winning...and pray daily that I can continue to keep j-b beaten....jmg Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 8/11/2010 2:45:00 AM Hey dude...I was on that show ! lol NOT ! I can feel ya here Sir, great way to vent...a poignant feeling to etch on slip ! james Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/10/2010 3:51:00 PM Maybe they are winning a prize for singing a song with the elast amount of change in range or being able to sing in monotone...I haven't seen that show...Good idea for a write..Sara Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 8/10/2010 1:29:00 PM Ps. Smile ~ Of course my dear friend, I was reading this poe from my own perceptions angel? Smile, "Much Love" ~ Login to Reply

John Rhinem Date: 8/10/2010 1:26:00 PM Smile ~ Somehow someway I can somewhat feel where Your coming from here my dear friend....Yet I would seem to be quite amiss myself I believe if, I were to suppose to cast a blanket of thought across an entire society I would say!!? ~ Smile, "Hello Beautiful Daver" &, I hope that life is treating You splendidly my friend!! ~ "Nice Poe With A Message" ~ "Much Love to You & Yours," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Day;" Bye!:) ~ Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/10/2010 1:04:00 PM hello Daver, how are you today!! good I hope and imagine,, you and your talented Haikus I love the multiple read. Have a nice one,..p.d. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 8/10/2010 12:45:00 PM DAVER,Thanx's U 4 a wOnderful. POem. A nice way tO EXPRESS wOrds * luv~ SKAT Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/10/2010 12:14:00 PM Hip hip harray, someone who feels the same way. Loved your poetry today Daver. Thank you for your kind comments also. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 8/10/2010 10:34:00 AM I think your opinion is shared by many, good write Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 8/10/2010 10:33:00 AM In my "opinion," this show was hilarious. I did see one or two decent performances, but few of the contestants displayed any real talent, Daver. As a concert musician, you should have been on the judging panel. The judges appeared to be embarrassed by the dreadful performances. When one was the least bit passable, you could see relief on their faces. I don't think this show is going to last. Love ya, Carolyn Login to Reply