Opiate Dream

There is a thirst
of many days
restrained in our body,
chained words on lips of dreams...

I think of her
the smell of oak essence,
memories of magnolia,
the salty wind of the sea returns...

She says she will be here
in just a few days,
her presence floats for a moment,
I wrap my whole being anxiously!

At that moment of full sensation,
my hands are sunk in grapes,
and my body feels surrounded
by her loving arms...
~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/27/2013 10:46:00 PM
Beautiful..beautiful..beautiful...
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Ken Carroll
Date: 12/27/2013 10:53:00 PM
Thank you Donna for the beautiful comment.. Ken
Date: 12/24/2013 4:38:00 AM
- Ho,ho,ho....Ken ! - Happy Christmas - Have a great time with family and good friends! - Santa Claus huggs from // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/24/2013 6:39:00 AM
Hi Anne, Merry Christmas! Ken
Date: 12/24/2013 3:26:00 AM
Ken--Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer
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Ken Carroll
Date: 12/24/2013 4:09:00 AM
Thank you Linda..Happy Holidays to you and your family.. Ken
Date: 12/20/2013 6:56:00 PM
Lovely memories! happy Holidays! Light & Love
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Ken Carroll
Date: 12/20/2013 7:11:00 PM
Thank you Debbie! ekn
Date: 12/20/2013 6:01:00 PM
Romantic work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your presence there was uplifting.Sara
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Date: 12/20/2013 6:03:00 PM
Thank you Sara! Ken
Date: 12/20/2013 2:29:00 PM
savoring each lyrical image swaying with tender hints of love, ken... wow!..huggs
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Ken Carroll
Date: 12/20/2013 2:36:00 PM
Thank you Nette for visiting! Ken
Date: 12/20/2013 1:11:00 PM
- Ken, a beautiful poem !!!! - Greetings to you from Norway: Wish you and everyone you love a enjoyable Christmas. - I hope the year 2014 will be a lovely and peaceful year. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/20/2013 1:13:00 PM
Thank you Anne..Happy holidays to you and your family as well! Ken
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