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Ophelia

O luckless maid! such beauteous blush with modest blandishments did'st flash to woo a Prince o'erthrown, in madness' grasp! Still-born, ne'er meant to flourish, true love was the hapless prey, Polonius lay cold, extinguish'd by the Dane's misguided sway. It drove thee mindless, to a frenzy, death thy only destination, borne by rippling river's eddy to thy final resting place.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/11/2008 12:04:00 PM
I really like it also like the idea of using a topic of a story u've to write ur poetry around. I either write from things i see or emotions i've felt, but so much can enspire and provoke u when reading a good story/play. I shall have a go too me thinks. Still think u should put it into the contest my ye olde english is rubbish to say the least. It fits perfect here as u havn't over u used or hindered the form through using such a writing style.
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Date: 12/11/2008 11:28:00 AM
have u entered the contest?
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