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An abode in winter’s castle, 
Speaks of harrowing tales.
Such as the damsel who parades herself in an,
Exotic black dress, a damsel who lures man with a kiss of her crimson rose.
Such a fragile existence is she,
Yet you still ponder who this pale beauty might be.
That it puts your mind into woes fatigue.
That she sweetly is able to whispers into your ears,
“Are you ready to wander on a journey so dark, that bliss would seem closer to hell than 
heaven”.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
April 1, 2010 at 10:29 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Guy. Love, Carol
Joseph Avatar
March 31, 2010 at 5:12 PM
Seems many are tempted by just such a promise of lust and adventure: and live many decades to regret that choice. Ah if men would only learn that any woman that parades will lead them straight to hell and char their soul. I love the last line. LOVE IT.
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March 31, 2010 at 4:11 PM
this is quite a journey.. good write
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