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Opening the Mind's Petals

OPENING THE MIND'S PETALS
Smoldering life spreads suffocating smoke all over Clouds the insular mind in pessimistic opacity, Beauty unseen beyond the myopic vision unclear Deforms in mind defined by contours of negativity. From the depth of depression it’s time I recover The sunk values of life, appreciate their sanctity. It’s time I leave desolate psychic landscape behind In flowers of a new garden I open petals of my mind.
April 14, 2018.

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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/12/2018 5:25:00 PM
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Love your last line, Subimal. Congrats on your well deserved top win.
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 11/10/2018 10:28:00 AM
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Hi Subimal, dropping by with my congratulations on your win in the contest, much deserved....Mike.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/7/2018 5:53:00 PM
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The title alone is a winner! Wonderful poetry, Subimal. Best wishes, Gershon
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/20/2018 2:26:00 PM
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Back to congratulate you on this fantastic write with a clear message. Simple yet profound. Well done!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/21/2018 1:20:00 AM
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Thank you, Susan for your constructive comments.
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P.M. Richter
Date: 5/20/2018 9:46:00 AM
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Congrats on your win Subimal. Nicely done.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/21/2018 1:20:00 AM
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Thank you so much.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/20/2018 6:25:00 AM
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Lovely, Subimal. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/21/2018 1:19:00 AM
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Thank you, Line.
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/5/2018 5:15:00 PM
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Many congrats Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/7/2018 2:52:00 AM
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Thank you, Jan.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/4/2018 9:01:00 PM
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Well done, Subimal. I like your spin on the challenge. Congrats on your win.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/5/2018 2:42:00 AM
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Thank you, Line.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 5/4/2018 1:27:00 PM
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Congratulations on your win. I love the simplicity of your poem. Your beautiful expressions are tender and inspiring.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/5/2018 2:42:00 AM
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Thank you, Susan. Why make life complicated?
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/4/2018 10:46:00 AM
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Beautifully expressed, and very wise and uplifting, Subimal. Congratulations on your fine win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/5/2018 2:41:00 AM
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Thank you, Sandra.
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John Lawless
Date: 5/4/2018 7:31:00 AM
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Subimal, I like the visual of the mind as a flower - petals opening to new thoughts. Thanks for entering the contest
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 5/5/2018 2:41:00 AM
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Thank you, John for liking and placing the poem.

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