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Opening the Mind's Petals

OPENING THE MIND'S PETALS

Smoldering life spreads suffocating smoke all over
Clouds the insular mind in pessimistic opacity,
Beauty unseen beyond the myopic vision unclear
Deforms in mind defined by contours of negativity.
From the depth of depression it’s time I recover
The sunk values of life, appreciate their sanctity.
It’s time I leave desolate psychic landscape behind
In flowers of a new garden I open petals of my mind.

April 14, 2018.

Copyright © Subimal Sinha-Roy | Year Posted 2018

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Line Gauthier Date: 11/12/2018 5:25:00 PM Love your last line, Subimal. Congrats on your well deserved top win. Login to Reply

Vladislav Raven Date: 11/10/2018 10:28:00 AM Hi Subimal, dropping by with my congratulations on your win in the contest, much deserved....Mike. Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 11/7/2018 5:53:00 PM The title alone is a winner! Wonderful poetry, Subimal. Best wishes, Gershon Login to Reply

Susan Gentry Date: 5/20/2018 2:26:00 PM Back to congratulate you on this fantastic write with a clear message. Simple yet profound. Well done! Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 5/21/2018 1:20:00 AM Thank you, Susan for your constructive comments.

P.M. Richter Date: 5/20/2018 9:46:00 AM Congrats on your win Subimal. Nicely done. Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 5/21/2018 1:20:00 AM Thank you so much.

Line Gauthier Date: 5/20/2018 6:25:00 AM Lovely, Subimal. Congrats on your well deserved win. Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 5/21/2018 1:19:00 AM Thank you, Line.

Jan Allison Date: 5/5/2018 5:15:00 PM Many congrats Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 5/7/2018 2:52:00 AM Thank you, Jan.

Line Gauthier Date: 5/4/2018 9:01:00 PM Well done, Subimal. I like your spin on the challenge. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 5/5/2018 2:42:00 AM Thank you, Line.

Susan Gentry Date: 5/4/2018 1:27:00 PM Congratulations on your win. I love the simplicity of your poem. Your beautiful expressions are tender and inspiring. Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 5/5/2018 2:42:00 AM Thank you, Susan. Why make life complicated?

Sandra Haight Date: 5/4/2018 10:46:00 AM Beautifully expressed, and very wise and uplifting, Subimal. Congratulations on your fine win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 5/5/2018 2:41:00 AM Thank you, Sandra.

John Lawless Date: 5/4/2018 7:31:00 AM Subimal, I like the visual of the mind as a flower - petals opening to new thoughts. Thanks for entering the contest Login to Reply Subimal Sinha-Roy Date: 5/5/2018 2:41:00 AM Thank you, John for liking and placing the poem.