Opening Candlewick

Honorable Mention 
Opening Candlewick 
Patricia Cresswell 

she speaks with gentleness to the walls 
leaves her memories and hopes in words 
between the layers of fresh spring paint 
she finds her mother and grandmother’s there 
rising up before, whispering their lives 
as the brush passes in loving ritual strokes 
across scrubbed pine planks 

intricately, through each other, are woven 
all the years of summer days 
for even nights are days stretched out across 
the fabric of remembrance 
small goodnight prayers fill the cracks and spells 
recited around midnight fires 
mix smokily into the faded shades 

tales of fish this big, hide amongst the shelves 
beside tattered, love worn fairy tales 
soft kisses of first love, a baby’s hungry cry 
ephemeral iron that bind this aged dwelling 
into forever 

buckets of colour empty 
blues, greens, gold and white 
dried by gusted winds, brief visitors, 
who detour toward the lake 
they carry potions of laughter, droplets of tears 
that sift between the evergreens 
and sink into the rocks and soil 

she washes the brushes 
sets them out on the porch to dry 
immersed in sounds 
forever return echoes of all the children 
who ran, bare brown bodies 
slipping free of convention 
while grown ups slept oblivious 
forever, come back the sighs 
as eyes peer to catch the last glimpse 
life closing in around the magic 
as a setting for some precious jewel 

she tends to its needs and 
the cottage abides 
in the sun drenched, cedar scented 
whisps of joy between each year 
Candlewick is a living thing of the heart 
carved out of that enduring blend of 
childhood and memories. 
it will live, always.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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