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Open Your Eyes and See

Today it feels like a summer's day But only i konow this climate will be teperate. It will soon fade away like the darling buds of May And all of this wil end on a specific date. The last day when the sun las shines When you realize the reason is you To why it seems as if the earth declines. Around you the day and night will soon become blue. Soon the life around this paradise will fade And only you will be left behind. On a place filled with plenty of shade Not even the lord will give you a hand. Because he wold want you to open your eyes and see That you haven't given life to thee.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/11/2010 4:22:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Chantal. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/9/2010 6:35:00 PM
I notice a lot of people are feeling this way lately. It's so sad the world has come to this. SO hard to have hope. I love that line: it will soon fade away like the darling buds of May. It is such a pleasing way to say it. Luv, andrea
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