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Open Your Eyes

Open your eyes, look all around People can do awful things, without making a sound If you really look, you will see The terrible place this world can be Few get in trouble for doing wrong, Its been this way all along Maybe if everyone opened their eyes, The bad in this world would shrink in size

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/29/2018 9:16:00 PM
Great message, mermaid girl.
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Date: 8/28/2018 12:55:00 PM
So would the amount of people in it too...A conscious write...All the best Mermaid girl...
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Date: 8/27/2018 8:34:00 PM
I love it! A fave! Perfect little poem, and too true :) xomo
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