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The clouds rolled by my Open window And deposited wisps of memories as i lay awake in the darkness Staring into this foggy space. Headlights fill the windows And squares of light run across the ceiling. A dog barks once, twice. Shadows move across the slit of light under the door. Voices that strayed, peppered with pauses. I closed my eyes Wrapped myself in a gentle breeze That blew away the fog And I floated into sleep.

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Date: 8/11/2013 12:24:00 AM
My hearty congratulations on your win my dear friend Zin. Thank you so much as well for sharing your excellent write. Have a grace-filled wkend! Love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 8/9/2013 7:26:00 PM
a nice winning poem.... SKAT
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Date: 8/8/2013 9:15:00 PM
Hello ZIn CONGRATULATIONS!!! With your awesome good poem' in Nathan's contest... xox Linda
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Date: 8/8/2013 8:14:00 PM
awesome & congrats "
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