Zin Lim Poet Free verse

Open Window

The clouds rolled by my
Open window
And deposited wisps of memories
as i lay awake
in the darkness
Staring into this foggy space.
Headlights fill the windows
And squares of light run across the ceiling.
A dog barks
once, twice.
Shadows move across the slit of light under the door.
Voices that strayed, peppered with pauses.
I closed my eyes 
Wrapped myself in a gentle breeze
That blew away the fog
And I floated into sleep.

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Len Gasun August 11, 2013 at 12:24 AM My hearty congratulations on your win my dear friend Zin. Thank you so much as well for sharing your excellent write. Have a grace-filled wkend! Love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Skat A August 9, 2013 at 7:26 PM a nice winning poem.... SKAT

Poet Destroyer A August 8, 2013 at 9:15 PM Hello ZIn CONGRATULATIONS!!! With your awesome good poem' in Nathan's contest... xox Linda

Nathan D. August 8, 2013 at 8:14 PM awesome & congrats "