Open Window

' Open window cold Sunlight thaws water birds drink Buds on willow swell

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Deb Radke

Date: 2/14/2011 2:24:00 PM

I open my windows as soon as possible after the long winter. The air is cold but the sunshine is heaven. I like this lovely promise of spring thaw. Love, Deb

James Tate

Date: 2/8/2011 3:15:00 PM

Sara, you caught my attention with this one. Good haiku. The open window made me wonder about the cold air coming in. But then I think you meant the curtains were open.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/8/2011 2:48:00 PM

beautiful imagery , good luck in the contest, Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/8/2011 11:01:00 AM

Oh, I really like this one Sara!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/8/2011 10:57:00 AM

a wonder to behold, sara!! a aure winner for me... :) huggs, nette

Carol Fillmore

Date: 2/8/2011 10:54:00 AM

Very vivid description!! excellent write, Sara:) Thanks for your comment on February Haiku; creative last line, yes, that was how I felt spring coming. Earth's fertility stirring....somewhere under these snowbanks here:)

Daver Austin

Date: 2/8/2011 10:31:00 AM

Good one, Sara - so much said in so few words. Love, Dave