- OPEN VERSE NO 1 -

 Snow
 cirrus clouds
 winter adventure
 horizon
 displays
      aurora borealis
 ice crystal effect
       fascinating
 temperature
 below zero degrees
 incredibly
      complex conditions
      lingering season
 arctic
 blast of cold air
 mercilessly
 climate research
 AVOID
 frostbite
 or hypothermia
      dress well

snowwinterverse

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Bill Baker

December 4, 2023 at 9:44 PM

Not winter wonderland when below freezing and snow and ice storm. Very good imagery in your contest entry, Anne-Lise. Good luck! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Regina Mcintosh

December 3, 2023 at 6:37 AM

Wonderful writing. love it. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina

Vijay Pandit

December 3, 2023 at 5:19 AM

Wonderful winter images--nicely done, Anne-Lise.

Jerry Brotherton

December 3, 2023 at 4:32 AM

You've described winter nicely. Stay warm my friend.

William Kelii Kekaula

December 2, 2023 at 5:53 PM

Former stateside, I kmow those conditions--here, kind of, never and a day. Nice sort of way, but cheers all the same, Anne-Lise. Aloha, William

Sara Kendrick

December 2, 2023 at 2:31 PM

Can't imagine going out in such cold. Whoa!! Reads like a good contender for a contest if written for one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Sotto Poet

December 2, 2023 at 1:13 PM

Anne-Lise, you have composed a very profound verse. Because cold weather is typically uncomfortable, preventing hypothermia is critical. You have chosen an extremely wise passage.