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Open the Floodgates

I scan the horizon as I trounce the arid desert. Brill trees and a trickling burn shape my stream. To me, it's as if I'm showing God's entail I querist. As away as I am aware, it is a magnificent dream. Perhaps, Lord, late openings are to be unlock. As well, I will fulfill all your vows around time. The clay under my feet is starting to awake.  It's all aside You that you've grown grass sublime. As I stray calmly amid the skylights. I'll induce firm my deft hand grips Yours tightly. My faith in You is vital, and I wish to highlights. And long for the holy avowal of Your majesty. I owe You, God, your unfathomable grace.  Much obliged for plunging me in your rife. I may never be skilled to repay Your fairness. But I'll behold to You till the ending of my life. As I range You, God, with love, you bestow. It has given me loftier reliance and ability. My solitude and aridity will soon vary low. And the lands and people's illness severity. I beg You, Heavenly God, to relieve the way. To strengthen the modest jewels of my soul Much obliged, Lord, for setting my break day. A blighted block of my moral being goal.
1ST PLACE CONTEST WINNER Written: April 24, 2022 Pick-A-Title, Vol 30 - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
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Pandit Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 8:19 AM
Back with BIG congrats on your TOP win, Lasaad.
Alex Avatar
May 30, 2022 at 7:16 AM
A very beautiful communion with the lord. Congratulations!
George Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 9:53 PM
Dear Lasaad , I am so happy, your poems are getting great recognition these days which they deserve.... ! Congratulations dear friend for your first place win.
Ibeh Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 4:15 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this phenomenal religious poem, Lasaad:-) Your poetry floors me every time!
Poet Avatar
May 29, 2022 at 5:19 PM
Thank you a very lot for everything, Edward. It means a lot to me that you took the time to read and comment on my poetry, as well as to position them where you did. I am grateful to you for providing us with the chance to broaden our horizons by taking part in the contest that you so thoughtfully selected.
Horsman Avatar
April 24, 2022 at 7:35 PM
Deep and profound, and so meaningful, amazing poetry, sure to do well in contest.
Pandit Avatar
April 24, 2022 at 5:50 AM
A poem of gratitude and longing for divinity---words of faith! Your poem conveys the reverence to God.
George Avatar
April 24, 2022 at 4:52 AM
A beautiful supplication to God affirming your Faith and pouring in your loyalty towards Him for guarding you from all perils ! Best of luck in the contest, dear poet friend !
Cunningham Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 11:10 PM
We should embrace and show gratitude for what he has given us. Good luck Lasaad. Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 10:49 PM
What a wonderful meaningful poem, Laasad.
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