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Open the Floodgate

Open the floodgate and you will see You will witness forbidden desires on their spree Priests will be seen lying drunk in bars Adolescents will speed up their sport cars Kids will eat loads of chocolates everyday Leaving their children mothers will go on holiday Students will relax on the eve of exams Computers will not bother to execute programmes People will dance naked in broad daylight Worms will fly to reach a new height Moths will hide their faces in darkness Bees will distribute honey to all with eagerness Sweeter will taste the fruits which are forbidden Open the floodgate and wonders will happen...

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Date: 2/29/2016 6:16:00 AM
Awe, Shah, that's nice to know. Have a good day. Linda
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Date: 2/23/2013 12:10:00 PM
Shah , today's a lovely day, and here you find me reading the feature poems of the week. !!CONGRATULATIONS with your nice verse!! always~ LINDA :-)
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Shah Jehan Ashrafi
Date: 2/29/2016 6:15:00 AM
Thanks poet Destroyer you made my come back to poetry soup
Date: 2/14/2013 6:53:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem with all the possibilities...many sound good to me.
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Shah Jehan Ashrafi
Date: 2/29/2016 6:15:00 AM
Thanks for reading and enjoying it David Fisher.. regards, Shah
Date: 2/12/2013 11:51:00 AM
i have to disagree people should be free to do what they want like the pattern though davidscott
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Shah Jehan Ashrafi
Date: 2/29/2016 6:14:00 AM
i always like people who disagree...but yes this poem was meant to be allowed to speculate..at least once David Scott..thanks for the comment..
Date: 2/10/2013 7:41:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup ..and Well.done on your poem..keep posting
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Shah Jehan Ashrafi
Date: 2/29/2016 6:16:00 AM
Thanks Charmaine

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