Open Road

Racing down the highway, enjoying the open road Off on another road trip to another zip code A stop for gas when needed Dashing off again, unimpeded Traveling through sunshine and rain Right turns then left again In and out of traffic in my jeep Passing other cars until my destination is reached

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Heidi Sands

Date: 8/5/2017 7:25:00 AM

This is a fun Acrostic :)

Skat A

Date: 9/5/2013 7:50:00 AM

a lovely win Joseph, SKAT

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2013 2:23:00 PM

WELL DONE, and congrats.

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 8/31/2013 1:57:00 PM

Carefree and adventurous......can I be your passenger? : ) Terrific write and win! Hugs

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/31/2013 8:33:00 AM

just stopped by again to say congrats on your win!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/31/2013 7:38:00 AM

Joseph, this is a lovely and awesome winning poem... congratulations...Linda

Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/31/2013 2:04:00 AM

Well done Congrats on your win.Morgan

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/30/2013 9:28:00 PM

Congrats to you...nice! BG

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/30/2013 8:34:00 PM

Joseph, thank you for supporting my contest. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Love, Kim

Joseph May
Date: 8/31/2013 7:05:00 AM

thank you for my placement in your contest Kim.......hugs

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/20/2013 3:12:00 PM

your acrostic flowed very well...you took the reader on the journey with you, it made me want to get in my car and take a little trip and enjoy the sites around me... nice one :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/16/2013 8:43:00 AM

Joseph, tank you for passing our way with your open destination. I pictured you enjoying this ride in a tops down convertable car. ENJOYED!! PS- Why aren't you on my favorite poet list?? Your amazing, I know your talent's amazing.. I see you on the winning list, more times than I can count. Anyways, I am a fan. I just can't write many poems like other poets around here. I wish I could compose daily poems. haha enough venting.. Glad I had time to read some of your poems this morning... take care... Linda

Joseph May
Date: 8/16/2013 12:58:00 PM

Thank you Linda...I cant write poems daily either....I am a fan of yours also...your avatar is lovely

Karen Anglesey

Date: 8/14/2013 8:16:00 PM

I enjoyed this acrostic. Creative and fun... way to go :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/14/2013 10:08:00 AM

like the title, Joseph, the poem flows and is freedom personified

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2013 2:51:00 PM

you did well!! SO it's ok to change the title a little? I already did mine on the title Road Trip. Haven' t posted it yet, but I really liked this challenge and I see you did too!

Joseph May
Date: 8/13/2013 3:42:00 PM

thank you Andrea....I didn't see any rules about the title...have you?

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/12/2013 10:19:00 AM

a thrill of adventure where your words take me to another zip code, joseph... lovely!..:) huggs

Joseph May
Date: 8/13/2013 3:42:00 PM

thank you Nette

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/11/2013 7:36:00 PM

Joseph a breath of fresh air lovely poem Shadow x smiles

Joseph May
Date: 8/12/2013 6:06:00 AM

thank you Shadow