Open Road

Racing down the highway, enjoying the open road
 Off on another road trip to another zip code
 A stop for gas when needed
 Dashing off again, unimpeded

 Traveling through sunshine and rain
 Right turns then left again
 In and out of traffic in my jeep
 Passing other cars  until  my destination is reached
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Sands Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 7:25 AM
This is a fun Acrostic :)
A  Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 7:50 AM
a lovely win Joseph, SKAT
Dietrich Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 2:23 PM
WELL DONE, and congrats.
Macfarlane Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 1:57 PM
Carefree and adventurous......can I be your passenger? : ) Terrific write and win! Hugs
Adams Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 8:33 AM
just stopped by again to say congrats on your win!
A   Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 7:38 AM
Joseph, this is a lovely and awesome winning poem... congratulations...Linda
Morgan Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 2:04 AM
Well done Congrats on your win.Morgan
Gorelick Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 9:28 PM
Congrats to you...nice! BG
Merryman Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 8:34 PM
Joseph, thank you for supporting my contest. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Love, Kim
May Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 7:05 AM
thank you for my placement in your contest Kim.......hugs
Adams Avatar
August 20, 2013 at 3:12 PM
your acrostic flowed very well...you took the reader on the journey with you, it made me want to get in my car and take a little trip and enjoy the sites around me... nice one :)
A   Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 8:43 AM
Joseph, tank you for passing our way with your open destination. I pictured you enjoying this ride in a tops down convertable car. ENJOYED!! PS- Why aren't you on my favorite poet list?? Your amazing, I know your talent's amazing.. I see you on the winning list, more times than I can count. Anyways, I am a fan. I just can't write many poems like other poets around here. I wish I could compose daily poems. haha enough venting.. Glad I had time to read some of your poems this morning... take care... Linda
May Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 12:58 PM
Thank you Linda...I cant write poems daily either....I am a fan of yours also...your avatar is lovely
Anglesey Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 8:16 PM
I enjoyed this acrostic. Creative and fun... way to go :)
Horsman Avatar
August 14, 2013 at 10:08 AM
like the title, Joseph, the poem flows and is freedom personified
Dietrich Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 2:51 PM
you did well!! SO it's ok to change the title a little? I already did mine on the title Road Trip. Haven' t posted it yet, but I really liked this challenge and I see you did too!
May Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 3:42 PM
thank you Andrea....I didn't see any rules about the title...have you?
Onclaud Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 10:19 AM
a thrill of adventure where your words take me to another zip code, joseph... lovely!..:) huggs
May Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 3:42 PM
thank you Nette
Hamilton Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 7:36 PM
Joseph a breath of fresh air lovely poem Shadow x smiles
May Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 6:06 AM
thank you Shadow
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