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soft rustling beneath the wrapping paper a toddler’s glee John G. Lawless ©12/28/2021

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Date: 1/13/2022 8:37:00 AM
You have captured a huge moment in but a few regular words.
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Date: 12/29/2021 10:55:00 AM
You undo poetry and spring it to life like a toddlers laughter :)
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Date: 12/29/2021 10:06:00 AM
So sweet and charming.... Happy New Year, Paulette
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Date: 12/28/2021 4:27:00 PM
Bullseye! Pass out the cigars! HNY, John! :) gw
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