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When I saw you my eyes were caught fore'er, My heartbeat halted from there on to race On marathon to win your love and grace, The gift of life I found, unique and rare. This jolly Christmas night I take a knee To our new start together hand-in-hand, Toward the blue horizons to expand As two in one, "Will you please marry me!?" All gifts for you, my precious wife-to-be, I saved throughout my life that led to you, And from now on unwrap them, one by one. Most cherished gift that you bestowed one me: My heart awoke and that instance I knew You won it, it's unwrapped, I am your man. December 15, 2019 ,

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Date: 1/1/2020 11:35:00 PM
Romantic and graceful, like a epiphania that became real... salute happy new year ! alkas
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Date: 12/24/2019 2:59:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Merry Christmas.
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Date: 12/16/2019 9:15:00 AM
I enjoyed your romantic sonnet, Margarita, best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John P.S. SoupMail
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 12/16/2019 12:46:00 PM
Thank you! Was tough to follow the “Must have” :)

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