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Open Door

You left an open door, And a stranger wandered in; She straightened out The cluttered rooms And mended broken things. She wiped away the dust And stains from many tears; She brought flowers, soft music And candles for light. . . . And . . . I closed the door.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/10/2014 11:15:00 PM
How nice and painfully true!
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Date: 9/10/2014 7:29:00 AM
Wow....this is amazing. And it sadly reminds me of how many times I've done this.
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Date: 9/8/2014 3:08:00 PM
Some things just weren't meant to be I guess. daver
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Date: 5/27/2012 9:31:00 PM
wow this is a wonderful pen.
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Date: 3/13/2012 1:59:00 PM
Well done William, like it alot.... - oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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