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Take your soul through an open door Follow yourself from evil Now you see Freedom is your making Let all be forsaken Before you are taken Walk a thousand steps Show several faces Secrets kept secret Desired from the admired Love with artfull passion Let your lover be the easel Sketch the fire with lusting touch Crave it taste it hold onto what you see Let the gods adore as you explore Be your own goddess Your mate be his own god Sip wine from one glass Do not hide and wear a mask Let past broken hearts go by Be you a truthfull cast Take each day as its your last As you walk with your soul Remember this day No need to beg and pray Today is the day Freedom is desired for all As your soul walks through an open door

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/22/2010 3:38:00 PM
The desire of two with wine they sip, on silken sheet between they slip. Their hearts become their open doors, be them a goddes/god as their heavens do soar. In truthful cast they take each day, as their souls unite, it speaks their say > excellent piece Sarah >> James
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Date: 6/21/2010 8:24:00 AM
this was deep. i am truly enjoying this moment. you are a very creatively sexy thinker/writer. ready for round three?
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Date: 6/21/2010 7:55:00 AM
Draw me in with this one Sarah, you really outdid yourself with this write, truely enjoyed this one...P.D.
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Date: 6/21/2010 7:33:00 AM
I'm speechless with this write, It's comepelling to me, I love it... your words mark beauty in it's line, I sound cheezy I know but I just really love this one lol =(^.^)=Royal
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Date: 6/21/2010 6:33:00 AM
Once again Sarah a wonderful compellng write.. great word usage and message here... Michael
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