Open Door...

Take your soul through an open door
Follow yourself from evil
Now you see 
Freedom is your making
Let all be forsaken
Before you are taken
Walk a thousand steps 
Show several faces
Secrets kept secret
Desired from the admired
Love with artfull passion
Let your lover be the easel
Sketch the fire with lusting touch
Crave it taste it hold onto what you see
Let the gods adore as you explore
Be your own goddess
Your mate be his own god
Sip wine from one glass 
Do not hide and wear a mask 
Let past broken hearts go by 
Be you a truthfull cast 
Take each day as its your last
As you walk with your soul 
Remember this day 
No need to beg and pray 
Today is the day
Freedom is desired for all
As your soul walks through an open door
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 6/22/2010 3:38:00 PM
The desire of two with wine they sip, on silken sheet between they slip. Their hearts become their open doors, be them a goddes/god as their heavens do soar. In truthful cast they take each day, as their souls unite, it speaks their say > excellent piece Sarah >> James
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Date: 6/21/2010 8:24:00 AM
this was deep. i am truly enjoying this moment. you are a very creatively sexy thinker/writer. ready for round three?
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Date: 6/21/2010 7:55:00 AM
Draw me in with this one Sarah, you really outdid yourself with this write, truely enjoyed this one...P.D.
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Date: 6/21/2010 7:33:00 AM
I'm speechless with this write, It's comepelling to me, I love it... your words mark beauty in it's line, I sound cheezy I know but I just really love this one lol =(^.^)=Royal
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Date: 6/21/2010 6:33:00 AM
Once again Sarah a wonderful compellng write.. great word usage and message here... Michael
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