Open Door

I know me now, like never before
I have just walked through an open door
My feet still steady on the ground
A whole new world I have found.

Its rich in all, the greatest gift you see
Please come through and walk with me
We will only go where we will find
Reality is state of mind

What you are thinking is who you are
Walk on with me and you will go far
Have control, write the script of life a bliss
And forever only think of this.

Cast all bad thoughts away
Ban them on return
Go back to your sript, feel the uplift
And your world will change before you
You will know who you are
What you want
And that everything is for you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 11/17/2009 1:18:00 PM
this made me smile and remember hoe good life can really be. thank you for your voice
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Date: 9/27/2009 2:53:00 PM
A nice door to go through Simone >> James
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Date: 9/25/2009 4:36:00 AM
it is a true shame nonehave commented on this befor they will i assure you rally have a gift with your use of ryhme I really like this write great job
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