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sucks in air, gasps - truth falls like a pail of water over door

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2025

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Jennifer Proxenos

February 17, 2025 at 11:27 PM

Truth is refreshing, a relief as you gasp and suck in air, a shock you feel like a bucket of water has just come down on you. Very True dear Kim. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

February 16, 2025 at 8:41 PM

This one kicks my bucket, Kim.

February 17, 2025 at 8:07 AM

lol

February 16, 2025 at 5:28 PM

Good one Kim, I guess truth can come as a shock! I remember that water bucket trick!

February 17, 2025 at 8:08 AM

Some don’t want to walk through the door! Hugs

February 16, 2025 at 8:41 AM

Really deep - a raw image in my mind

February 16, 2025 at 1:42 PM

Ditto! I love your work. <3 xxoo

February 16, 2025 at 10:28 AM

You always make my day and touch my heart! Thank you, Paige!

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