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open door

sucks in air, gasps - truth falls like a pail of water over door

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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 2/17/2025 11:27:00 PM
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Truth is refreshing, a relief as you gasp and suck in air, a shock you feel like a bucket of water has just come down on you. Very True dear Kim. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/16/2025 8:41:00 PM
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This one kicks my bucket, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/17/2025 8:07:00 AM
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lol
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David Crandall
Date: 2/16/2025 5:28:00 PM
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Good one Kim, I guess truth can come as a shock! I remember that water bucket trick!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/17/2025 8:08:00 AM
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Some don’t want to walk through the door! Hugs
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Paige Hind
Date: 2/16/2025 8:41:00 AM
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Really deep - a raw image in my mind
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Paige Hind
Date: 2/16/2025 1:42:00 PM
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Ditto! I love your work. <3 xxoo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/16/2025 10:28:00 AM
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You always make my day and touch my heart! Thank you, Paige!

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