open door

feet are chill cold’s invited in for a spell
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Fowler Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 11:13 AM
Get some thick socks ;);) Nice! :)
Greenhough Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 3:04 PM
This is an interesting senryu. Perhaps a fireplace warmed a little too much. This poem has me thinking "Shut the door", since I don't like cold feet.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 8:04 PM
Usually me too.
Goldsmith Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 10:51 AM
Few words with much said.... Have A Blessed Day Writing Away........
Rodrigues Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 2:58 PM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Hind Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 10:34 AM
A tender poem- in its own way, as beautiful :)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 13, 2024 at 2:59 PM
Lovely day today. A bit cool but it will be way too hot soon. :)
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