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Written September 19, 2023

Poetry/Verse/Open Air Church By The Ocean
Copyright Protected, ID 09-1579-705-19
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Wayfarers Chapel Photograph by Mountain Dreams - Fine Art America

Open Air Church By the Ocean



The ocean side church is serene and I am alone
with the Lord and I am praying silently
flickering candles cast shadows
as a tear falls down my face unchecked
I bow my head in grief
O, Lord help me find the strength to live
carry me out the darkness I am in
O, Lord show me the way to you
show me a place heavenly
Lord, I am now ready . . .
suddenly, I am aware of the birds
the doves flying everywhere 
in the open church by the ocean
the many plants are swaying in the breeze
it is so beautiful
in my heart God spoke to me
embrace the beauty of this world
go forth and find your peace
so, I left the church and the birds and walked
the ocean shore and all my pain was gone
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McBride  Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 4:48 PM
Beautiful poem, love it , and what a blessing when one begins to see the beauty of God's creation surrounding them
La France Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 3:53 PM
Stephan, thank you so much for the compliment and comment
Rodrigues Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 1:34 PM
So interesting how God gets our attention especially with nature!
La France Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 3:54 PM
Kim, thank you so much for the comment, I say a church like this in a movie and I never forgot it.
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