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chaotic uprising of humanity
milling throngs
in their intellectual stupor
search endlessly
for beans ...
and stuff.

murky faces
masking minds
that compete for favors.
races crash in harmony
of wanton pick-up desires
as love ceases to exist.

blaring music
battles pinball machines
to rankle dope shattered nerves.
coffee blotches
tables and chairs of putrid green.
the floor rises up with
suffocating scents.

open twenty-four hours a day
welcoming  night souls.
The Hot Dog Palace
a farcical palace
where hot dogs are terrifying
and the Man
can maintain
his scrutiny
of
creation.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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November 22, 2010 at 11:45 AM
Many congrats on your feature this week Rgds Janette
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November 22, 2010 at 11:24 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Sue. Love,Carol
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November 21, 2010 at 5:55 PM
Congrats Sue on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great choice to share with us all today .. may u and yours enjoy a very Happy Thanksgiving with luv..
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