Anisha Dutta Poet Tanka

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'Nothing is more opaque than absolute transparency.' - Margaret Atwood

Opaqueness

OPAQUENESS 

     Posing introvert,
      being aloof and alert,
      remaining inert,
      You are staying far apart  
     possessing an opaque heart.
    
     I am transparent
     owning bright heart salient.
     Waiting fervent.
     Me luminous radiant.
     Opaqueness undercurrent.

    11/25/19 


   "Strand Special 6' Contest by Brian Strand

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Gregory Richard Barden December 21, 2019 at 4:35 AM Sincere congratulations on your Honorable Mention in Brian's contest, Anisha - best wishes and blessings to you and yours for a Merry Christmas! Keep up the great work, my friend! :o) <3

Brenda Chiri December 21, 2019 at 4:21 AM Congrats on your placement!;)

Kai Michael Neumann November 25, 2019 at 5:09 AM What a match ... Anisha Dutta November 25, 2019 at 7:28 AM Thanks Michael. Best Wishes.

Caren Krutsinger November 25, 2019 at 12:08 AM Good luck in the contest, Anisha. I do believe you have radiated a wonderful poem out of the word "opaque!" Anisha Dutta November 25, 2019 at 7:28 AM Thank you Karen to appreciate. Love.