Opaque

His eyes held the opaque aura of vagrancy
immune to the generosity of strangers
offer him dubious fulfillment,
reflect a scene without ever seeing it
his eyelids a blinking metronome
counting coup on times tenacity.

This blindness, this long sullied sight,
devoid of compassion, empathy
tarnished in the blackened light of day
denying what once was seen as beauty
shuttered visions shadow dancing world
gray forms in silhouette half life.


©11/22/2019

opaque poetry Contest
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Laurie Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 6:23 PM
G'day John … I picture the bloke as someone who has given up on humanity and prefers to be left alone - thank you John - Lindsay
Lawless Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 7:43 AM
...or has humanity given up on him???...Thanks for stopping by Lindsay, always nice to hear from you
Na Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 9:14 AM
Well done John. Thanks for sharing this. Best of luck in the contest. Happy Thanksgiving
Lawless Avatar
November 25, 2019 at 7:55 AM
thanks Greg, these contest themes set the muse loose
One Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 6:09 AM
a poem that highlights loneliness and sadness... nice entry for the contest..
Lawless Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 7:42 AM
The eyes are the windows of the soul-less. Or just glazed over by the Black Friday frenzy
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