Opaque

Nobody noticed her pain and resourceful depression

As façades piled onto charades of deceitful appearance

	She cut a pattern onto her skin with razor blade strokes

Her innocent blood oozed a translucent shine of despair

In her mind she was not even worthy of scratching the surface

	Deeper and closer she incised the stark abyss of hurt

A bandage here and a plaster there hid naked lacerations

For non-transparent smears clotted like coagulated tears

	A rope would dissect her brain right at the base

Her instinct told her that finally a few severed arteries

Would allow her family and friends to inspect her sorrows 

	Once the noose had disentangled confusion

Dichotomy of body and mind dangled in promise and

If all else failed there was a train or a murky gas oven

	Suffocated voices and remains trapped on the track

Over time the razor got blunt and the stove exhausted its fuel

The hawser had torn and railways had abandoned all service

	I can see what you cannot yet dream of in hope

And when wounds had festered enough and scars started healing

Someone gave her the potion of love hugged her and listened

	Opacity had become shattered through kindness


21st November 2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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November 27, 2019 at 11:32 PM
And I thought mine was dark. Though sad, there are great descriptions and this is a unique idea for the contest. I love the last line.
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