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Opalescent Path

I could adorn you with great riches, but my greatest gift to you is my poetry. Like a pearl without an oyster, I roll along a precipitous path, through a plethora of vacant shells - none seem to be my sanctuary. Slightly dizzy, swirling and twirling, my glass heart illuminates, scintillating upon dust and blackness, seeking that opalescent path, where dawn is greeted with crystal skies. Meadows glisten in emerald dew drops, as luminous rose gold sun silently soars, awakening sleeping tulips to spread their petals. Sun rays blossom through amethyst stained glass, reflecting upon her bronze plum cheeks, shimmering upon her ruby - rosy lips. Revelations of silver glints in her eyes are like diamonds that only sparkle for me. When our shades infuse and absorb, our spirits float like a spectrum of butterflies. Juices flow like emerging stars at twilight - An end to lonely monotonous darkness. But what am I, but a lonely pearl 'rolling and strolling,' yearning to feel glorified within my beloved's opalescent path.

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Date: 1/13/2024 3:10:00 PM
I especially liked this stanza.. "When our shades infuse and absorb, our spirits float like a spectrum of butterflies. Juices flow like emerging stars at twilight - An end to lonely monotonous darkness."
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Date: 1/12/2024 1:42:00 PM
Beautiful images of the pearl and skies... wish you both
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Date: 1/11/2024 7:07:00 PM
Rare pearls of poetry shared underneath a telling sky, oh let that pearl roll, onwards, always treasuring the earth, write it in the sand dear one, "The Silent One Was Here ",
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Date: 1/11/2024 1:17:00 PM
Wow, SO! A masterpiece from the Master of Verse! Outstanding verse, a very enjoyable read! Bob H
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Date: 1/11/2024 12:50:00 PM
So eloquent and dreamy in its romance, Silent One. Another FAVE. Have a splendid evening. ~
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Date: 1/11/2024 11:11:00 AM
- With this wonderful poem you can surely wake sleeping tulips ... and never again roll alone, my friend - Love it :) - hugs
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Date: 1/11/2024 9:49:00 AM
Dear SO, your poem is exquisitely crafted. I am filled with admiration and amazement upon reading such a splendid piece. The evocative imagery and profound essence of your words leave a resounding impact. The introductory lines immediately seized my attention and resonated deeply within my heart. Your words possess the ability to touch the very soul of a romantic individual. Your imagery and gentle rhythm reflect a cadence as delicate as love itself. Wishing you a splendid day ahead.
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Date: 1/11/2024 8:42:00 AM
another magnificent creation, Silent One. I love how artistically you presented romance. The first few lines grabbed my attention and spoke to my heart. I loved 'glass heart illuminates' as well as 'what am I but a lonely pearl, rolling and strolling, yearning to feel glorified within my beloved's opalescent path. Your words speak to a romantic's soul. Loved your imagery and the flow, a cadence soft as love itself. have a great day, Sara
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Date: 1/11/2024 7:58:00 AM
this would have been well received listed az "Personification" dear poet, though; this write pulled me in as the "free verse"...the 'pearl' huh sir? Okay... i pray the mind boggling rare ;) much love
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Date: 1/11/2024 7:32:00 AM
Awwn this is so beautiful dear silent one, opalescent path it is, so well depicted and written about using flowers and gems and colours that enhance the purity of romance and selfless nature of love that flows in poetic eloquence. I am not sure which of the lines hit me strongest but i can say i love the way you’ve written “ awakening sleeping tulips to spread their petals. Sun rays blossom through amethyst stained glass,“ artistic and creative and your alliterations too flow just seamlessly!
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Date: 1/11/2024 7:33:00 AM
How ethereal and cosmically divine is the way you’ve written “our spirits float like a spectrum of butterflies. Juices flow like emerging stars at twilight -” absolutely stunning and made me just go wow! Captivated by how you’ve written that! And the ending too is soul stirring! So evocative and touching! Impeccable write! Only few can write romance like you do! This is a fave for me
Date: 1/11/2024 7:26:00 AM
I love pearls and love your poem - it resonates beautiful, soft yet never fragile. Just love this. God bless you always, love, Gina
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