Opalescent

Oh! the blaze of light and color
playing power of vibrant luster.
with a rainbow hidden in its soul
she's a princess, a spectral cluster.

Rain seeping voids of crevasses  
cracks of porous silica rocks,
amorphous tiny spheroid balls
an effulgence perfect Goldilocks
 
A gem that forms in million years, 
sensuous palette of random pattern
like a Christmas tree she glistens, 
a chrysanthemum flamed lantern.
 
The Opal stone, oh !.. too sensuous 
a salsa dance of sequins and beads. 
purple in passion and golden in  love 
she brings the peace, the world needs. 





Dated 15th May 2019

Sponsor	-Line Gauthier
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Placed 3rd in the contest list
Also featured 3rd in best new poem list.
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Pandit Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 8:21 AM
A gem of a poem this is, Debjani..so well written! Congrats on your win..and congrats on being #3 on the best poem chart..soon to be #1.
Sparrow Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 2:14 PM
Fabulous work! Your images are clear and shining. Wanted to read this one several times through!
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 12:32 PM
Hello Debjani Mitra, a wonderful poem.I have enjoyed this rhyme. have a nice day my friend.
Barden Avatar
May 27, 2019 at 3:16 PM
Oh, this is just marvelous, Debjani - such wonderful metaphor and phrasing, and the intimated rhyming is delicious - this is going into my favs! Superb write, my friend! :-) <3
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 12:33 PM
The best for me: like a Christmas tree she glistens, a chrysanthemum flamed lantern. Congrats and hugs...Kim
Agustin Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 9:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for enriching my mind with your gems of truth. God bless you.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 4:01 AM
Congratulations on your top win. Thank you for your nice comments on my poems.
Dutta Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 9:50 AM
Congrats to win top.Blessing
Mitra Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 11:37 AM
Thanks mam. I will always need your blessing and encouragement. You are an inspiration for me
Faulkner Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 10:58 PM
An opulent ode to opals, congratulations!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 16, 2019 at 10:25 PM
Congratulations on top honors for your skillful use of words Debjani, Aloha Willam
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