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Opalescent

Oh! the blaze of light and color playing power of vibrant luster. with a rainbow hidden in its soul she's a princess, a spectral cluster. Rain seeping voids of crevasses cracks of porous silica rocks, amorphous tiny spheroid balls an effulgence perfect Goldilocks A gem that forms in million years, sensuous palette of random pattern like a Christmas tree she glistens, a chrysanthemum flamed lantern. The Opal stone, oh !.. too sensuous a salsa dance of sequins and beads. purple in passion and golden in love she brings the peace, the world needs. Dated 15th May 2019 Sponsor -Line Gauthier Contest Name: TRIBUTE TO A PRECIOUS OR SEMI-PRECIOUS GEM Placed 3rd in the contest list Also featured 3rd in best new poem list.

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Date: 6/13/2019 8:21:00 AM
A gem of a poem this is, Debjani..so well written! Congrats on your win..and congrats on being #3 on the best poem chart..soon to be #1.
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Date: 6/11/2019 2:14:00 PM
Fabulous work! Your images are clear and shining. Wanted to read this one several times through!
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Date: 6/6/2019 12:32:00 PM
Hello Debjani Mitra, a wonderful poem.I have enjoyed this rhyme. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 5/27/2019 3:16:00 PM
Oh, this is just marvelous, Debjani - such wonderful metaphor and phrasing, and the intimated rhyming is delicious - this is going into my favs! Superb write, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 5/20/2019 12:33:00 PM
The best for me: like a Christmas tree she glistens, a chrysanthemum flamed lantern. Congrats and hugs...Kim
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Date: 5/20/2019 9:00:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for enriching my mind with your gems of truth. God bless you.
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Date: 5/18/2019 4:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win. Thank you for your nice comments on my poems.
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Date: 5/17/2019 9:50:00 AM
Congrats to win top.Blessing
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Debjani Mitra
Date: 5/17/2019 11:37:00 AM
Thanks mam. I will always need your blessing and encouragement. You are an inspiration for me
Date: 5/16/2019 10:58:00 PM
An opulent ode to opals, congratulations!
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Date: 5/16/2019 10:25:00 PM
Congratulations on top honors for your skillful use of words Debjani, Aloha Willam
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