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Ooze

…one foot sucked into a mud bog...that next step ~

Copyright © Arlo Parker | Year Posted 2023

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Charmaine Chircop

August 24, 2023 at 1:13 PM

We all get our foot stucked in the mud sonetimes...but thanks God we have two feet,so hopefully the other foot would help us take a step high and pull out of that mud..Very wise post..Arlo

Charmaine Chircop

September 6, 2023 at 12:15 PM

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August 25, 2023 at 11:35 AM

Sometimes that foot is a tongue. Thanks, CC :-))

Panagiota Romios

August 23, 2023 at 6:25 PM

Yikes, Arlo, Iam sinking. I haven’t been on line much as far as commenting. Sorry.. Pangie….

August 23, 2023 at 11:31 PM

Use your time for you, Pangie, our poems are posted for a long time. :o)

August 18, 2023 at 4:47 PM

Which leg of the journey to choose? And will it still be with shoes? Would be Uppermost in my mind Arlo, enjoyed The quandry you portray; today '

August 18, 2023 at 9:04 PM

A bit of a conundrum 2 b sur. How often are we sucked into our own mud? :o/

August 17, 2023 at 7:29 PM

Stuck ! From my observation, there's no next step, unless someone offers to help. :) Just sayin'.

August 18, 2023 at 1:09 PM

We need each other and we make a lot of missteps!! Thx 4 comments, BL.

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