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Oops In the Garden

For the love of God Evie, Please give it a rest, After last night you should know, That I love you the best. That Lilith thing I had, Was ages ago And no apples got eaten, As I'm sure you must know. Because you bit it first, Then you gave me a bite, And Then I jumped your bones, For the rest of the night. That evil old Snake, Guess he wasn't so bad, Though it's his fault we did it, I feel kinda glad. 'Cause here in the garden, It's really been swell, But to be loved by you, Was worth risking Hell. So quit weeping old girl, For your virginity's loss, We both gotta Figure, What we'll tell the Boss. Now another day's dawning, Please Honey don't cry, Let me lay here and admire, The curve of your thigh. What's been done is done, Our Sin can't be reversed, Our prayers and apologies, All sound rehearsed. But if we're to be punished, By our Master above, I'll face it enraptured, To have tasted your love.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/18/2010 5:56:00 PM
Hello, William here I am stopping by to say hi and CONGRATULATIONS! What a delightful poem. Had fun reading your featured poem of the week. Take care,.. p.d.
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Date: 9/18/2010 8:13:00 AM
Great write, William. Congratulations on being featured this week. Dan C
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Date: 9/13/2010 12:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week here at PoetrySoup Bill. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/12/2010 4:15:00 PM
Congrats Will on your featured poem this week on the Soup... an excellent winning poem to share with us all..with luv..
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Date: 6/2/2010 12:33:00 AM
Wonderful take on the thought process of Adam. Congrats on your win! Dan C
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Date: 6/1/2010 11:56:00 AM
Super poetry William, many congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest >> James
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Date: 5/31/2010 5:12:00 PM
Congrats for the second place win
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Date: 5/31/2010 4:35:00 PM
Congrats William on your second place win in the ADAM in Eden contest with this dynamic write... with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/28/2010 10:27:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry and I thank you for sharing it with us William. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health love and loads of inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/27/2010 12:21:00 PM
Well William I am in such a dilemma as each entry I am reading is better than the one before.. how oh how will I choose a winner from all these wonderful entries? u have captured the essence of the Garden and the plight of the inhabitants.. a great write ... good luck is all I can say for the moment ..judging my contest is going to be a wonderful experience ..so many ADAMS so fine.. thankxxx with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/27/2010 10:35:00 AM
good luck in the contest enjoyed the poem,..p.d.
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