Oops He's Done It Again

Freshly changed diaper
Baby poops it and giggles
Change diaper again

Jan Allison
31st July 2014

Written for Haiku "aha" Moment Contest. Sponsored by Regina Riddle
Awarded 4th place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 8:17 PM
hahaha. Love the humor of yours, Jan.
Allison Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 4:47 AM
Thanks Andrea - I am trying but missing writing with Darren he's disappeared from site at the moment I Hope and pray he is OK. Hugs Jan xx
Onclaud Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 2:26 PM
funny and well composed, jan.. huge congrats!.. huggs
Allison Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 2:33 PM
Thanks as ever your all your comments nette - you inspire me and your awesome contests challenge me! Hugs Jan xxx
A. Sharma Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 12:41 PM
Brilliant haiku I must say,, congrats on win Jan !
Allison Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 12:42 PM
Thank you so much Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 11:45 AM
- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 12:16 PM
Thanks for taking the time to comment Anne Lise I do appreciate it:-) Hugs Jan xx
Smith Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 3:47 AM
Congratulations Jan on a beautiful win....hugs Tim
Allison Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 5:43 AM
Thanks Tim.... it brings backs lots of memories LOL. Hugs as ever Jan xxx
Mehta Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 1:15 AM
Nice recollections of memories, Jan. congrats
Allison Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 3:01 AM
Oh Just seen Ive got 4th place thank you so much for your comment Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Sietesantos Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 10:14 AM
heheheheh - I remember those day! Thanks for the memories:-). Great haiku, my friend!
Allison Avatar
August 6, 2014 at 11:16 AM
I am so thankful for disposable nappies LOL Hugs Jan xxx
Kendrick Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 8:43 AM
Those are some challenging days..At one time it was another diaper to wash now it is money down the drain but they are worth all the effort..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Allison Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 8:53 AM
Yes how would we have coped without the invention of disposable nappies LOL. Your aging poem is excellent and really hit home - it is no fun having ill aging parents:-( Hugs Jan
Kendrick Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 8:45 AM
About my poem aging..I am sure that to the person who has dementia it is like living in a mist or fog for the connect in the brain no longer work properly..It is very hard on the family who have to deal with this aspect of aging..I have been there and it is painful..Sara
Jr Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 3:17 AM
Simple & beautiful! Good luck in contest! Moein :)
Allison Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 4:58 AM
Thanks for dropping by Moein. Hugs Jan xxx
Nance Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 9:32 PM
Yep! I am in the process of potty training Abby, some days are better than others! Great moment. I do wonder why babies giggle when they poop do ya think it is because we make funny faces at them...
Allison Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 4:58 AM
It could be LOL. They all do it at their own pace Cas she will get there. At 2 David decided he no longer needed a nappy at night he just told my hubby that he no longer needed one! Hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 12:32 PM
- Always :))) ..... yes !!! - Love it, Jan - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 4:25 PM
Thanks for dropping by as ever Anne Lise:-) Hugs jan xxxx
Lewis Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 10:33 AM
The title is baited. Nicely done
Allison Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 10:37 AM
Thank you TS I do try and lure people in with the title I find it as important as the poem itself:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Smith Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 9:47 AM
I hated that but now that mine are older I get a kick out of it....hugs Tim
Allison Avatar
July 31, 2014 at 9:51 AM
I loved every moment of the baby stage Tim and son didn't go through the 'terrible two's stage' so was very lucky:-) Thanks for your comment I do appreciate your support. Hugs as ever Jan xxxxx
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