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Oops He's Done It Again

Freshly changed diaper
Baby poops it and giggles
Change diaper again

Jan Allison
31st July 2014

Written for Haiku "aha" Moment Contest. Sponsored by Regina Riddle
Awarded 4th place

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2014 8:17:00 PM

hahaha. Love the humor of yours, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/9/2014 4:47:00 AM

Thanks Andrea - I am trying but missing writing with Darren he's disappeared from site at the moment I Hope and pray he is OK. Hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/8/2014 2:26:00 PM

funny and well composed, jan.. huge congrats!.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 8/8/2014 2:33:00 PM

Thanks as ever your all your comments nette - you inspire me and your awesome contests challenge me! Hugs Jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/8/2014 12:41:00 PM

Brilliant haiku I must say,, congrats on win Jan !

Jan Allison
Date: 8/8/2014 12:42:00 PM

Thank you so much Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/8/2014 11:45:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/8/2014 12:16:00 PM

Thanks for taking the time to comment Anne Lise I do appreciate it:-) Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/8/2014 3:47:00 AM

Congratulations Jan on a beautiful win....hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 8/8/2014 5:43:00 AM

Thanks Tim.... it brings backs lots of memories LOL. Hugs as ever Jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/8/2014 1:15:00 AM

Nice recollections of memories, Jan. congrats

Jan Allison
Date: 8/8/2014 3:01:00 AM

Oh Just seen Ive got 4th place thank you so much for your comment Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/6/2014 10:14:00 AM

heheheheh - I remember those day! Thanks for the memories:-). Great haiku, my friend!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/6/2014 11:16:00 AM

I am so thankful for disposable nappies LOL Hugs Jan xxx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/1/2014 8:43:00 AM

Those are some challenging days..At one time it was another diaper to wash now it is money down the drain but they are worth all the effort..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 8/1/2014 8:53:00 AM

Yes how would we have coped without the invention of disposable nappies LOL. Your aging poem is excellent and really hit home - it is no fun having ill aging parents:-( Hugs Jan

Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/1/2014 8:45:00 AM

About my poem aging..I am sure that to the person who has dementia it is like living in a mist or fog for the connect in the brain no longer work properly..It is very hard on the family who have to deal with this aspect of aging..I have been there and it is painful..Sara

Moein Jr

Date: 8/1/2014 3:17:00 AM

Simple & beautiful! Good luck in contest! Moein :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/1/2014 4:58:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by Moein. Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/31/2014 9:32:00 PM

Yep! I am in the process of potty training Abby, some days are better than others! Great moment. I do wonder why babies giggle when they poop do ya think it is because we make funny faces at them...

Jan Allison
Date: 8/1/2014 4:58:00 AM

It could be LOL. They all do it at their own pace Cas she will get there. At 2 David decided he no longer needed a nappy at night he just told my hubby that he no longer needed one! Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/31/2014 12:32:00 PM

- Always :))) ..... yes !!! - Love it, Jan - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/31/2014 4:25:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by as ever Anne Lise:-) Hugs jan xxxx

Ts Lewis

Date: 7/31/2014 10:33:00 AM

The title is baited. Nicely done

Jan Allison
Date: 7/31/2014 10:37:00 AM

Thank you TS I do try and lure people in with the title I find it as important as the poem itself:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 7/31/2014 9:47:00 AM

I hated that but now that mine are older I get a kick out of it....hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 7/31/2014 9:51:00 AM

I loved every moment of the baby stage Tim and son didn't go through the 'terrible two's stage' so was very lucky:-) Thanks for your comment I do appreciate your support. Hugs as ever Jan xxxxx

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