Oomph

If energy fails, And liveliness slows, If strength becomes weak And life’s sparkle goes. Grab a partner…dance. Vivacious verve Can be restored. Let vigor thrive. Set life to drive. Do the deal! Jump and reel. Dancing heals - Mighty Vigor Oomph! Ó November 15, 2011 Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

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Rick Parise

Date: 11/15/2011 12:18:00 PM

Kick it up..............This brings nice thoughts with a smile to the soul !!Howz the "FORM" study going? Looks like fun. Forge on....Blessings to you and yours. ^Rick

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/17/2011 11:35:00 AM

Still studying those forms, Rick....with great enjoyment! Thanks for asking!

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/15/2011 11:59:00 AM

Maybe that is what I need to get the oomph back in me. Love it. phyl

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/17/2011 11:35:00 AM

We could all use a little oomph. lol Thanks for commenting.

Tony Lane

Date: 11/15/2011 10:44:00 AM

I like it! I can't do it but I like it. Tony

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/17/2011 11:36:00 AM

Thank you so very much for reading my poetry and taking time to leave your comment. I appreciate you more than you might imagine. I have really enjoyed these few days that I have had the opportunity to write and read some poetry here on the soup. It’s great to be able to do so and hopefully, it will continue. But…life is about to be hectic once again…soon. I send my love. Sincerely, Dane Ann

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/15/2011 10:40:00 AM

:) Very upbeat poem, Dane Ann, and thank you for your comment. I kept envisioning your Volvo going "oomph!" But don't worry, I got the true message of hope. Beautifully written, dear. I know you are too busy to write comments and I surely understand that. Love you, Carolyn

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 11/17/2011 11:38:00 AM

Shake it to the left. Then, shake it to the right! lol Then, bring it on home! LOL The Volvo that is! Darn car! Thanks for being you. Smiles, Dane