Oold Old Jack

OOld old Jack, he is a dog.
He has been unable to make call sound, only OO O...         
He sleeps all day, does not want to walk  around       
He is really too old. An old big dog!  
        
OOld old Jack, he is a dog.          
He is really too old, always OO... O...          
The person taking care of him is an old widow,          
She attends Old Jack very carefully, gives him water and meat          
Jack is really too old, has already no teeth          
Drinking only by licking, only licking gruel...          
This way is still alive, let a person really uncomfortable.   
OOld old Jack, you old big dog!  

        
The maid to old Jack named Zoe          
I have smiled and said to her, let Jack go.         
Zoe said to me seriously, can not let Jack go          
As old Jack is her dead husband's most loyal friend!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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De Beaulieu Avatar
January 29, 2017 at 8:37 PM
A true dog friend to her husband a lovely poem you wrote. I enjoyed it.
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