Oohs and Ahhs of the Audience

Stan was marrying Paula, an artist, and he was thrilled to bits
he had seen brides come down the aisle before
but nothing like this …..
she had painted her wedding gown
a move most women would have not dared to try
he imagined her mother’s face when she said she was doing it
Paula’s dress started out traditionally white
but flowed rainbows to the hem
Stan had never seen such a gown
By the oohs and ahhs of the audience
he doubted they had ever seen it either
but suspected they would now
His wife, the trend-setter!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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