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Ooh That Hurt

Ooh that hurt! Splatted face-first in the dirt, Oh good grief! I think I've rattled my teeth. I thought I could out run that team, Cause I'm the fastest thing you've ever seen, The reason I couldn't get loose, Was I forgot to tie my shoes. 8/16/18 Contest

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Date: 9/2/2018 5:01:00 PM
OUCH!!! made me smile Timothy, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/2/2018 8:07:00 PM
Thank you Jan
Date: 9/2/2018 12:21:00 PM
Thanks for the laugh, Timothy, and congrats on your placement in my humble contest. All the best, Viv
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 9/2/2018 8:08:00 PM
Many thanks Viv!
Date: 8/19/2018 12:35:00 PM
A great lesson, Timothy. LOL very sweet.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 8/20/2018 3:46:00 PM
Thank you Miss Line! :) xx
Date: 8/17/2018 12:32:00 AM
Lol! Thanks. I needed a laugh. :)
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 8/17/2018 4:23:00 PM
Thank you. I fixed a typo while I was here too! :)
Date: 8/16/2018 7:07:00 PM
A little light poetry! Enjoyed!
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 8/16/2018 9:15:00 PM
Thank you Kim!

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