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Oo: Feeds the Dog On Tripe

feeds the dog on tripe- -
a cloud of gas surrounds him
as he sleeps it off

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Skat A

November 28, 2015 at 6:23 PM

Jack, awesome...SKAT

Judy Ball

January 26, 2012 at 7:53 AM

Cute one Jack. I am one who loves to give her doggoes little treats of people food here and there so I can identify with this. God Bless, JB

Poet Destroyer A

December 24, 2011 at 9:16 PM

Jack... Have a Merry Christmas and a happy New Year. May your Wishes come true this coming Year! God, bless you and your happy family. Always, here to enjoy the love that goes around the soup... ~p.d.

Nette Onclaud

December 18, 2011 at 10:32 AM

uh oh.. tripe!..so uniquely scribed.. love this, jack! :) huggs!

Carolyn Devonshire

December 17, 2011 at 10:48 AM

You are so funny, Jack! I was laughing out loud reading your haiku. This will be a chart-topper in the contest for sure. Love, Carolyn

Elizabeth Wesley

December 16, 2011 at 1:27 PM

Serves him right, Hope he took a fan to bed!

Russell Sivey

December 16, 2011 at 5:31 AM

:) great Haiku Jack! I enjoyed the write immensely...it brought a smile to my face!! That is definitely an Offensive Odor!! Awesome Work!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

December 16, 2011 at 3:36 AM

My friend had just started feeding her dog tripe...same result. Love it. Thanks for looking in on my work and taking time to comment itss appreciated x

Andrea Dietrich

December 15, 2011 at 9:57 PM

THis is DOGGONE Good!!!

Robert Pettit

December 15, 2011 at 5:13 PM

Beef tripe is not really that bad. It's an organ meat; so there is very little fat on it. Ever heard of "pepper pot soup"? It's a Philadelphia favorite that's made with beef tripe. Your haiku is written well.