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sometimes it harder to find something interesting to write about being popular leads us to want things certain ways the level of professionalism steeps throughout each piece of work great i greater from it's appeal the way it makes you feel and it's charm upon delivery it's rangey but I can try to appease sid the singer about the song they made it sound like her former works cushioning for her audience the intros needs more attention the first structure needs to have more appeal the subject matter questions her sincerity asking the audeince is she for real don't wanna say ooh when the chorus change we should channel our effords here the ooh's the ahh's need refreshing come baby let's keep it real said love to many times before only to have the backgrounds say bla-bla won't get this done takes some time let's be for real! Conditioning myself to sing like this won't have this done if ya'll aint real. practice see where I'm coming from take some time let's be for real. strangs real sweet a groovey bass rattle your drawers off on the floor damn that sounds right in any place twick the lyrics and keep it real. Like what I feel sing with me make me right do your thang sang in accordance with me written and composed by: Forte-Ritard-Trill-Cresendo

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Date: 8/30/2022 2:00:00 PM
Ya'll ain't nuttin on meaty, He swigg nasty and ya'll all getting there! Trill Adagio Fifth chair soprano sax
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