Ontrosceptic
sometimes it harder to find something interesting to
write about
being popular leads us to want things certain ways
the level of professionalism steeps throughout
each piece of work
great i greater from it's appeal
the way it makes you feel
and it's charm upon delivery
it's rangey but I can try to appease
sid the singer about the song
they made it sound like
her former works
cushioning for her audience
the intros needs more attention
the first structure needs to have more
appeal
the subject matter questions her sincerity
asking the audeince is she for real
don't wanna say ooh when the chorus change
we should channel our effords here
the ooh's the ahh's need refreshing
come baby let's keep it real
said love to many times before
only to have the backgrounds say
bla-bla won't get this done
takes some time
let's be for real!
Conditioning myself to sing like this
won't have this done if
ya'll aint real.
practice see where I'm coming from
take some time let's be for real.
strangs real sweet a groovey bass
rattle your drawers off on the floor
damn that sounds right
in any place
twick the lyrics and keep it real.
Like what I feel
sing with me
make me right
do your thang
sang in accordance with me
written and composed by:
Forte-Ritard-Trill-Cresendo
Copyright © Allan Terry | Year Posted 2022
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