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Only You

I shall continue to say and I shall not stop I shall let the world hear and let them know For water springs in the well you dig and with no stop In this heart it becomes a sea and ocean flows Of joy, bliss and eyes wear a show I shall rise up my voice into the air And alloy your name with the air To transport it all over where exist In her quiet way that chimes the hear And let them know you are ~ oh sweet As pleasant as honey You are dear and of harmony You are love within which my heart dwells That makes me speak of love in a lovely way You are just ~ just who you are angel Your alcoholic heart alloys with mine ~ I' m intoxicate Your seductive voice seduce my sense I'm out of thought But of you... you and only you I sense In each second the pendulum streams

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Dominic Amezimi

Date: 11/6/2016 2:17:00 PM

this is writing with fervour.

Justin Bordner

Date: 10/8/2016 6:42:00 PM

The inebriation of your heart spills the sweet amber of love joy Afolabi...and in your celebration of that warm goodness you teach us the strength of loving. "Bliss and eyes wear a show...and alloy your name in the air." Fine poetry Poet...J.A.B.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/4/2016 1:10:00 AM

Beautiful Poem.... very passionate....

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 10/4/2016 2:38:00 PM

I enjoyed the pleasant comment so well. My friend. Thank you.

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 10/4/2016 2:37:00 PM

I enjoyed the pleasant comment so well. My friend. Thank you.

Chris Hagy

Date: 10/2/2016 6:41:00 PM

Beautiful and intoxicating write!:)

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 10/4/2016 2:36:00 PM

Love really intoxicates, so I am. Thanks for dropping by.

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/2/2016 9:19:00 AM

Hi Afolabi, WoW! I felt the love and passion in each line. Well done-7:-) Alexis PS. Thanks for visiting my page

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 10/4/2016 2:35:00 PM

You are always wellcome Alexis. I appreciate your worm comment.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2016 3:54:00 PM

a lovely declaration of love Afolabi:-) hugs Jan xx

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 10/4/2016 2:34:00 PM

I enjoy your sweet feedback. Thanks my friend Alison.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/23/2016 7:58:00 AM

Powerful and passionate poem wrapped in romanticism dear Afolabi!

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/26/2016 3:25:00 AM

Thank you for taking your precious time to comment, sir. I carefully wrote this for my sweetheart. She deserves it.

Jenni Kalicharan

Date: 9/22/2016 10:12:00 PM

This is truly a beautiful testimony of love!! A pleasure to read.. Thanks for your visit to my page earlier.... Jenni

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/23/2016 1:30:00 AM

Oh my friend Jenni, you are a gifted poet, I say. Thanks for the pleasant words.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/22/2016 12:17:00 PM

Isn't true love beautiful, Afolabi!! This sounds very heartfelt and sincere; no wonder your woman loves to hear the passionate and romantic words you address to her! ~ Regards // paul

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/22/2016 5:54:00 PM

Oh yea, she loves it, especially when I read it to her hearing; most especially in our mother tongue..lol! She loves it so much. Thank you for dropping by sir. I appreciate your worm comment.

Joseph May

Date: 9/22/2016 9:14:00 AM

The nectar of love is intoxicating...nicely penned

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/22/2016 12:04:00 PM

Yes, that is so so true my friend. The scent of love is heady already, but now I've drunken the whole alcohol of love. I really do appreciate your dropping by.

Abosede Ogundare

Date: 9/20/2016 6:21:00 AM

This is beautiful! Thanks for sharing this romantic poem of yours

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/20/2016 5:17:00 PM

Well, you are to thank for taking your time to read and commenting to poem. Thank you.

Unknown Person

Date: 9/18/2016 3:58:00 AM

oh..wow...love full of emotions..right..

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/20/2016 5:14:00 PM

thank you for shopping my friend. this gem is really full of love emotion for my lovely girl.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/16/2016 8:19:00 PM

Yes, love can be intoxicating, Afolabi. I appreciate that metaphor in this sweet poem!

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/20/2016 5:12:00 PM

Thank you ma for enjoying my honey poem. I love your worm and pleasant comment.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/16/2016 1:29:00 PM

- A really lovely poem with emotion, Afolabi - Best wishes and a delightful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/20/2016 5:06:00 PM

Though my reply was late, but i shall ask. how was your week end? I really enjoy your good feed back. Much love.

Manu Singh Tanwar

Date: 9/16/2016 5:52:00 AM

Very loud and very clear shower of feelings...very well written

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/20/2016 5:03:00 PM

Yes yes, my friend. I used a very loud speaker to say it out and my voice so clear. Lol! I sing it as song to her hearing all the time, even though, all the poems i composed for her, posted and unposted ones. I sing it as song to her hearing and she loves it. She laughs a lot whenever I sing it. thank you for dropping by, i appreciate your comment.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/15/2016 8:30:00 PM

Love sure does have the power to intoxicate Afolabi. A touching declaration of love! : ) 7

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/20/2016 4:39:00 PM

Yes, that is true my friend. love intoxicate so well that you do all thing because of it. Thank you for shopping, much love.

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/15/2016 8:15:00 PM

Afolabi, this is such a lovely, romantic and passionate write which bares your heart and your intense love. Well done! Sandra

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/20/2016 4:33:00 PM

I appreciate your very worm comment. This poem bares my heart, the depth feeling within. lol! My love for her is unending as the day and this poem shall celebrate her in as much people read it. Thanks a lot.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/15/2016 4:35:00 PM

Interesting work..Very passionate and a delight..Sara..Thanks for the visit to my page..

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/20/2016 4:22:00 PM

yea, she deserves the love I give, for she gives happiness I ever expect. thank you for your pleasant comment, i do appreciate it.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/15/2016 1:27:00 PM

It's interesting the way you seem to swim in a sea of emotions. Dream analysts say the sea holds our most powerful thoughts. How wonderful that you can "alloy" her name with the air and transport it everywhere. Sounds lie true love!

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/15/2016 2:38:00 PM

I think I'm alloying her name with the air, right now or should I say I have alloyed her name with the air just now. Lol! Her love really really intoxicates me. I can't hide it, I love her so so much. Thank you for commenting, I appreciate it.

Manu Singh Tanwar

Date: 9/15/2016 6:12:00 AM

wow...i can read how blended this poem is with the feelings.....

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/15/2016 3:07:00 PM

Yea, it was penned with true feeling of affection in my depth heart. Thanks for the positive comment.

Afolabi Muideen
Date: 9/15/2016 11:39:00 AM

Thank you for dropping by.