Glo Bar Poet Free verse

Only You

You, only you
Make me feel
Like that
up there
like a hat
down here
like a ear
close to hear
what appear
to be done
with such fear
Wildly flying
in the air
Frozen stuck
in the grass
lying down
softly resting
till the night
reaches its ending!

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Caren Krutsinger July 25, 2018 at 7:03 AM Anna, this tribute to Zoey P. is wonderful! And I like the feeling that it is only temporary, not permanent, and you will see her again, for you definitely well, and yes, she may come back. Glo Bar July 25, 2018 at 11:22 AM Thanks but I am not sure whether the comments are for my poem

Caren Krutsinger July 25, 2018 at 6:55 AM I would like to see this brightness, Kale, and I think you would too.

Caren Krutsinger July 25, 2018 at 6:46 AM Hilarious! Your word picture has brought the entire event into the reader's eyes!

Caren Krutsinger July 25, 2018 at 6:36 AM Your monorhyme is fine! Not easy to do, but you have delivered, and it is well done.